Here is a place where students from Mr. Johnson's class can post their writing. Please make when you are publishing, sign your name at the bottom of your piece.
Thursday, March 31, 2011
Sleeping Stars
Slepping stars so big and bright, Always shine through the night, When Galeleio saw you through his telescope, It left the world with great big hope, When you are asleep you sparkle the sky, That makes everyone want to walk by, Sleeping stars.
Darius, I love the reference to Galileo! I also appreciate your rhyme scheme (AA BB CC D). It was really powerful that the last line didn't rhyme with the others. I also appreciate the personification of the stars--I've never thought of them as "sleeping" before! :)
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ReplyDeleteMaile
Oh there is the name. Sorry. Anyway I love your poem and how you ended the poem with the title, brilliant. Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteMaile
Actually you were right the first time I did not have my name but I read your commet and fixed it. And thank you for that nice commet.
ReplyDeleteDarius
Darius, I love the reference to Galileo! I also appreciate your rhyme scheme (AA BB CC D). It was really powerful that the last line didn't rhyme with the others. I also appreciate the personification of the stars--I've never thought of them as "sleeping" before! :)
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