Here is a place where students from Mr. Johnson's class can post their writing. Please make when you are publishing, sign your name at the bottom of your piece.
Wednesday, March 30, 2011
Moon Break
The Moon breaks light as the little
night creatures tremble in terrible fear and as the parents
Hi Kamryn J. i loved the poem and how you put the moon as some scary beast in the sky
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I love all the beautiful words in your poem "tremble" "creatures" "terrible". Maile
ReplyDeleteYou used alliteration .I liked that.-Shub
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