Forever you will light the sky
As the sun goes down
you form a beautiful glow,
perfect and dramaticly shown
to our world.
On dark nights you always
stand out as if
you were a ping-pong ball
on a pitch black table.
You're th eone person who lights
our gloomy world, unafraid
to brighten the dark night sky.
Through a clear, dark night
your vivid personality lights
the wonders of darkened day.
Forever you will light the sky
My favorite part is the image of the "ping-pong" ball. I felt that was a very clever image to create. I also felt your repetition of "dark" was interesting . . . I liked it. Why did you decided to bold face it?
ReplyDeleteTo awnser your question real quick- I bold faced it because it would then look darker and stand out more so more people could understand the meaning of why I was trying to say dark a lot. Since bold face is dark and I was boldfacing the word "dark" I thought it would be an interesting add-on
ReplyDeleteThat's smart . . . I would have never thought of that. Nice addition to your poem!
ReplyDeleteI like your poem,and I like the words you used.
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