Here is a place where students from Mr. Johnson's class can post their writing. Please make when you are publishing, sign your name at the bottom of your piece.
Wednesday, March 23, 2011
The Tree On The Moon
There is a tree on the moon, I have seen it through my telescope. It has been there ever since I was born. The way it grew must have been a mirracle of the universe. I still find it fascinating that a tree can grow on the moon.
This is a nice "wondering" piece. Sometimes when I look up at the sky I do lots of wondering but I never write them down. Thanks for sharing. By the way, who wrote this? There is no name.
I saw you writing this peice- oh Mr.Johnson this is Aaron's peice. Anyway I can see you put a lot of effort in to your moon poem, many people did but I specificaly enjoyed all of the interesting words in your poem "fascinating" and "Mirical" were all good words to include.
This is a nice "wondering" piece. Sometimes when I look up at the sky I do lots of wondering but I never write them down. Thanks for sharing. By the way, who wrote this? There is no name.
ReplyDeleteI saw you writing this peice- oh Mr.Johnson this is Aaron's peice.
ReplyDeleteAnyway I can see you put a lot of effort in to your moon poem, many people did but I specificaly enjoyed all of the interesting words in your poem "fascinating" and "Mirical" were all good words to include.
Maile S.
I remember you and I was working on editing our poems and I remember this.This was very good I can see you worked hard.
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